Raatri came today
In a different attire,
Stars all over her body
At the end of my reverie;
She, the night came today
Covering her face by the flame,
I was then in a seizure
Couldn't recognize my dame!
(for another version of this, in my mother tongue, see http://theboatsong.blogspot.com/p/mother-tongue.html)
In a different attire,
Stars all over her body
At the end of my reverie;
She, the night came today
Covering her face by the flame,
I was then in a seizure
Couldn't recognize my dame!
(for another version of this, in my mother tongue, see http://theboatsong.blogspot.com/p/mother-tongue.html)
Thank you for joining Poets United. I have added your blog to our blogroll so others can discover you and your wonderful poetry. Poets United is what you make of it so explore, comment often and it will lead to folks doing so in return. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading your poetry.
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~ Robert Lloyd
thanks for joining and following my blog as well! Hope we would be interacting more about poetry! comments and critiques are always welcome...
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